cc.slim,
Your story was interesting. There were some grammar errors throughout (run on sentences in particular).
I had a little trouble tracking at times, but that's common for me when working with retelling of dreams.
I did like the weekend warrior message, however. It wasn't...
I didn't see a word limit. Sorry. To be fair, you can remove my entry from the voting. Microsoft says my story is 720 words or something. I can't exactly hack that down. I put too much thought into every word used to be able to bring it down to less than 300 words. Really though, I won't...
Entry #5
I hope I'm not too late; I just found out about this.
For the record, I usually take a bit of a free-writing approach. Whether or not that's significant is beyond my knowledge.
This one is a little bit violent. Hopefully that won't be a huge problem. I'm not explicit in my...