Neirai the Forgiven
Christian Guilds List Manager
err, Dorkelf, could you move the repost of Chapter 1 up to the previous spot? it's all out of order now, and I think that's kind of confusing to the reader.
[EDIT (Dorkelf): Done, sorry for the confusion. Wasn't sure whether or not you wanted the unrevised version to remain for comparison, didn't want to assume. Your revision has now replaced your original post.]
Edit: thanks, De
[EDIT (Dorkelf): Done, sorry for the confusion. Wasn't sure whether or not you wanted the unrevised version to remain for comparison, didn't want to assume. Your revision has now replaced your original post.]
Edit: thanks, De
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