Fantasy Readers Unite!

Prologue
• over the governer’s palace – governor’s
• zig-zagging among – zigzagging
• arcs of the governer’s palace – governor’s
• room came from from a lone – from from? Only one  I call a typo.
• man and lept from – idea… use Ctrl + F and search for lept… then fix to leapt
• Nicholai smirked an evil smile – smirked with an evil smile won’t butcher grammar-freaks like… me… and Microsoft Word -.o

Chapter 1
• get ahold of their silver – a hold
• Squeazing his way through – squeezing
• road that ran throught the area – through
• To the left, was his hometown, to the right, the Wastelands. – super grammar rule, whatever you do in one part of a list, you do to all parts… like the following: THE cat, THE dog, and THE mouse, instead of the cat, dog, and mouse.

END OF EDITS… FOR TONIGHT
 
at least you know and understand words, whether you can spell them or not :D no corrections tonight - band function and massive pile of computer science homework... which is odd, since it's the most repetative class we're taking and she makes us repeat more... a couple of times is necessary, but when it gets to like 30 problems where you divide numbers by two without calculators (we keep a remainder for the purpose of finding binary code) until 0, and one number is 10732... o.o
 
It makes me feel warm and googly inside...

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... right...
okay well more edits coming your way this weekend, though i feel some i'm-tired-of-work-i-need-play in me...
"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy."

...

Redrum...
Here's Johnny!
 
I'll download it tonight and check it out. When I was done typing each chapter I'd forget to do a spell check. And because I hated the MSWord underline thingy I turned it off! Oh pooy on me.

Also, 200TH POST! YEAH! w00t! YOU GOT PWNED!
 
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you have Word... and... and...
DON'T USE SPELLCHECK! *DIES*
*stands up*
*DIES AGAIN*
*repeats until necessary*

WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! [whoa i just typed ?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! without ??, !!, or one at both ends and no backspacing... o.o]

that's mostly how i've been giving you edits (i <3 the red and green underlines!!!)

you could have saved me my self-created enslavement to... helping you... or something like that! i work in vaaaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin! AAAAA! *dies finally for the last time (for a while at least)*
 
Ok. It's updated. My bad.

The thing was that when I first started my book, I turned off all edits so that it wouldn't bug me with the scribbly red and green lines. I was, after all, making up lots of words :-P I never turned it back on, nor pressed the ABC button because I saw that it was all pretty. BUT, not it's back to normal.

Don't hate me, be cool :cool:
 
word's spellcheck isnt the best in the world...

youd figure if you payed 600 bucks for something it would run smoothly and fix everything for you..
 
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